(Praying Hands; Image by Pixabay)
- I liked the author's use of dialogue in the beginning of the story to discuss what Psyche was thinking at the time; I feel like this gives a better insight to each character and helps the audience feel more connected to them
- Psyche is portrayed as a very thoughtful, humble, and kind person who wants to cause no drama with anyone
- A plot twist to this could be that Psyche instead of praying, goes directly to argue with Venus and sort out their problems face-to-face quicker
- This article uses several personifications and simile like comparisons
- Another plot twist would be if Ceres actually helped Psyche instead of sending her away and saying that her and Venus had a lasting friendship
- Instead of the friendship, the plot twist could be changed where Ceres has anger towards Venus for stealing a boyfriend or something (this would make it more modernized)
- Juno also turns Venus away
- Instead, another idea would be if Ceres and Juno teamed up to help Psyche go against Venus' little scheme and form their own friendship between the three of them
- This article uses a lot of insight in Psyche's character; I would add in more dialogue, I typically seem to think dialogue helps make the read go faster and easier; it is more succinct
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